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1. If I can change the history, I'll remove racial discrimination between people in all their lives, but I'll create competition between them to get of the science .
2. I'll remove hatred and animosity between the people because they cause the wars .
3. I'll set up the principle of human relationships between people, and people should have good manners.
4. Of course, there are a lot of the difficulties to change the history because the differences are between the people in their religious and the way their lives.
5. I'll defend the oppressed in anywhere in the Earth so he has different culture.
6. I'll try to help the people to grow the land, and build of the buildings. On the other hand
I'll develop the sciences for the benefit of all people.
7. I'll close the cultures of peoples to each other so they can live in peace.
8. I'll decide that there should be one language to talk with each other .
9. I'll help to keep the animals from extinction ,and protect these animals.
10.Actually, I'll change some things in my life , and plan well to future.
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1. If I can change the history, I'll remove racial discrimination between people in all their lives, but I'll create competition between them to get science .
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3. I'll set up the principle of human relationships between people, and people should have good manners.
4. Of course, there are a lot of difficulties IN changING history because the differences are between people in their RELIGIONS and the wayS OF their lives.
5. I'll defend the oppressed anywhere in the Earth so he(?) has A different culture.
6. I'll try to help people to grow the land, and CONSTRUCT buildings. AT THE SAME TIME, I'll develop SCIECE for the benefit of all people.
7. I'll close(MAKE CLOSE?) the cultures of peoples to each other so they can live in peace.
8. I'll decide ONE LANGUAGE IN WHICH PEOPLE TALK with each other .
9. I'll help to SAVE animals from extinction ,and protect these animals.
10.Actually, I'll change some things in my life , and plan well to THE future.
YOU TEND TO USE TOO MANY "THE." THINK WHEN YOU SHOULD AND SHOULD NOT USE IT.